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I am...Whysteria by ~daydreamer91794:icondaydreamer91794:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word


I am one person.
I wonder how many people see that.
I hear the whispers of hate and disapproval.
I see a smile I love, moving away.
I want to be held.
I am different.

I pretend not to care but deeper I go in my dark abyss.
I feel the warmth on my hand go cold.
I touch a picture but want the real thing.
I worry about how it effects people around me.
I cry for memories that might never be made.
I am being destroyed.

I understand the reason but I still don't care.
I say "I'm fine" when I lose myself more and more.
I dream of a tree with forbidden fruit I bite one and it's sweet.
I try to cope but it hurts more and more.
I hope I can forget and move on.
I am alone.
©2008-2009 ~daydreamer91794
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Author's Comments

Yay! This is the first deviation I ever made! YAY!!! You were probably wondering when I would post something. So here it is, yay!
This is about how my OC Whysteria feels about being forcibly separated from her best friend (no, it's not Teal, Sabrina, or Amber) it's Myroku. (the guy she likes but won't admit it)
I might write a story that would explain about why they're separated, but I haven't even thought of the beginning. ^^;
I would like to thank my teacher Ms Kurzen for giving me the idea for the poem, SomethingSmall for giving me the good criticism, SorasAngelGirl for helping me post it ( SorasAngelGirl: Hi!!). Hope you like it, and congratulations me, I posted something!

Whysteria and Myroku (c) to me

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~natallia1994 Sep 21, 2008, 12:40:24 PM
omg i love this its really good your really talented at poetry i can really relate to what the poem is saying
GOODWORK

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"Madness, as you know, is like gravity, all it needs is alittle push..." Joker - The Dark Knight

:sumo:
:spork: FEAR THE SPORK! :spork:
:icondaydreamer91794:
~daydreamer91794 Sep 21, 2008, 1:37:59 PM
Thanks so much yay your the first commenter.

I did it in class it really just popped in my head.
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~natallia1994 Sep 21, 2008, 3:01:47 PM
your welcome

is cool how things just pop into poeples heads

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"Madness, as you know, is like gravity, all it needs is alittle push..." Joker - The Dark Knight

:sumo:
:spork: FEAR THE SPORK! :spork:
:icondaydreamer91794:
~daydreamer91794 Sep 21, 2008, 4:38:40 PM
A naked Edward just popped in my head.
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~natallia1994 Sep 22, 2008, 5:30:12 AM
WHAT! haha thats funny

my imaginary edward just read this and hes in the corner holding himself I STILL WANA KNOW WHAT YOU DID hes all emotional

--
"Madness, as you know, is like gravity, all it needs is alittle push..." Joker - The Dark Knight

:sumo:
:spork: FEAR THE SPORK! :spork:
:icondaydreamer91794:
~daydreamer91794 Sep 22, 2008, 4:29:33 PM
Muahahaha i'm not telling!
:iconnatallia1994:
~natallia1994 Sep 24, 2008, 12:46:02 PM
it shall remain a mystery

--
"Madness, as you know, is like gravity, all it needs is alittle push..." Joker - The Dark Knight

:sumo:
:spork: FEAR THE SPORK! :spork:
:iconsomethingsmall:
Mood: Happy ~SomethingSmall Sep 26, 2008, 4:43:00 PM
Yeah, well, I've got an imaginary Seth! :giggle:

Anyways, Gah! :ohnoes:
Your first post! *runs around in circles until mom tells her to calm down*
You is super talented!
I really love this!
By the way, you should write a story about why they're sepperated.
You alredy told me but I want to read it.
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